Thesis statement: It's better to live in just one place during people's life.
Reason for 1:People maintain a regular life by virtue of this.
Example 1:People are more succesful at work or school since they live in the same place during their life.
Reason for 2:They don't keep up with new places and persons.
Example 2:They have good relationships with their friends because they are together all the time.
Reasons against:Other people think that living in the different places is good and enjoyable for people. They say the person can be social by changing his place, continuosly.
Refutation of opponent's argument:People can not keep up with the new lives in a short time. Travelling all the time is tiring for them. Leaving their places is difficult so they do that, unwillingly.
This is a well-developed outline. The only thing I would like to say is about the thesis statement. Could you please write it in a more detailed way? Write the opponents' views and reasons in phrases. Then, you can start writing.
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